BE-YOU-tiful
When you wake up in the morning and
look in the mirror, you should tell yourself that you are beautiful.
Know that you are the best you there are out there. If you don’t know that
you’re beautiful and have confidence in yourself then it can lead to serious
problems. These problems include:
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Low self-esteem
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Sadness
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Feeling like you
don’t belong
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Health risks such as eating disorders.
Having low self-esteem can lead to
health risks such as eating disorders. Eating
disorders are illnesses that cause people to think they are not beautiful
unless they are tiny and skinny. Some people think they HAVE to be skinny in order to be
beautiful. This is not true. That is because being beautiful does not come in
any shape, size, or form. Everyone around you is beautiful and everything
around you is beautiful, too.
Don’t talk
yourself down because that will only make you sad!
Remembering to have a positive
attitude when looking at you is always very important. Never let anyone tell
you how to look or what not to look like. Whatever you want to be is allowed!
We’re all allowed to be happy and
comfortable in our
own bodies.
Learning to be comfortable in your
own body can be hard for some people. However, you can easily help yourself to
be comfortable in your own body! These are some simple tips you can to do help
remind yourself that you are beautiful:
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Laugh a lot!
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Be positive
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Smile everyday
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Be kind
Remind others around you that they
are beautiful, too! It’s important to remind the
people around you that they are also beautiful. That is because you don’t
want anyone else feeling upset with the way they look. You don’t want the
people around you feeling uncomfortable in their own bodies. No one should ever
feel like they don’t belong because of the way they look! Here are some simple
ways to remind people they’re beautiful:
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Tell them they look good
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Be nice!
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Always be honest
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Be accepting
Always remember to be yourself.
If you’re not yourself, then who will be? No one! Be the best you.
Don’t let anyone tell you that you’re not beautiful. Always hold your head high
with a smile on your face. Remember that you ARE important!
There is no real image of beauty. We are all unique in different ways! Tall,
short, thin, thick… We are all beautiful in our own special ways.
REFERENCES:
About
eating disorders. (2014). Eating disorder
statistics. http://www.anad.org/get-information/about-eating-disorders/eating-disorders-statistics/
Boosting self-esteem. (2013). The impact of social media and body image.
http://selfesteem.dove.co.uk/Articles/Written/the_impact_of_social_media_and_body_image_does_social_networking_actually_trigger_body_obsession_in_todays_teenage_girls.aspx
In the first sentence, I would not say in the morning twice. The last paragraph seems redundant. I would not say We are all beautiful in our own ways then say we are all beautiful in our own special ways. Maybe try to combine the two. I think it is very good for the audience we are writing to. I noticed a few places a comma should go, but nothing to serious. Good Job
ReplyDeletewith the introducing sentence I would suggest not using the word morning more than once. other than that I would of possibly added a little more color or a few more pictures to really attract the mind of a young child. good job.
ReplyDelete-In the first part, I would say When you wake up in the morning and look in the mirror,
ReplyDelete- Know that you are the best "YOU" out there.
-In the last paragraph I would say, Be the best "YOU" possible.
It looks good otherwise, just adjust your spacing throughout. Don't forget to cite your pictures and add citations in the text where needed. Use the number reference method.