What Animal Would You Be?
Figure one |
Imagine you were able to be an animal for just one day. Your FAVORITE animal no matter what it is! What animal would you want to be? A lion? An elephant? A gorilla? A Giraffe? Animals, such as the ones in Figure one, have strong and healthy bones, because they do not eat candy and chocolate all the time. They limit the unhealthy food they eat, because it is not good for them and will not help them grow up to be strong and healthy! To stay away from bad foods, and to keep them growing to be big, strong animals, they eat healthy foods like vegetables, fruits and meat! If you want to be strong and have muscles like your favorite animal, you need to eat your fruits and vegetables! Unhealthy foods are foods that have flavor added to them, and are processed at a factory (4). They copy natural food to get the same flavor, and look to them (1). Processed foods can be healthy for you in some ways, but not all are healthy and can hurt your body (3).
Foods You Should Eat
If you want to have strong muscles like your favorite animal does, you need to eat the right types of food. Healthy foods would be vegetables, meat and fruit. They are foods that give you the right vitamins that you need everyday. Figure 2 shows a group of healthy foods that you should have in your weekly diet. They are important to have in your diet, because they will keep you healthy as well.
Vegetables: Some choices of vegetables would be broccoli, green beans, peas, carrots, corn, tomatoes, and spinach!
Fruits: Some choices of fruits would be apples, bananas, oranges, blueberries, strawberries, pears and cherries!
Meats: Some choices of meats would be chicken, fish, beef, and turkey!
References:
1) Academy of Nutritional and Dietetics. (2014). Surprise! This is Processed Too!. In It’s About Eating Right. Retrieved from http://www.eatright.org/Public/content.aspx?id=6442471055
2) Carocho, M., Barreiro, MF., Morales, P., Ferreira, ICFR. (2014). Adding Molecules to Food, Pros and Cons: A Review on Synthetic and Natural Food Additives. COMPREHENSIVE REVIEWS IN FOOD SCIENCE AND FOOD SAFETY, 13, 377-399.
3)Moubarac, J., Batal, M., Bortoletto Martins, A., Claro, R., Bertazzi Levy, R., Cannon, G., Monterio, C. (2014). Processed and Ultra-processed Food Products: Consumption Trends in Canada from 1983 to 2011. Canadian Journal of Dietetic Practice & Research, 75, 15-21. doi:http://dx.doi.org/10.3148/75.1.2014.15
4)Polopolus, L. (1967). Synthetic, Substitutes, and Food Marketing. Journal of Marketing, 31(4), 12-17.
5)Rezai, G., Kit Teng, P., Mohamed, P., Shamsudin, M. N. (2014). Journal of food marketing. Structural Equation Modeling of Consumer Purchase Intention Toward Synthetic Functioning Foods, 20, 13-34. Doi: 10.1080/10454446.2014.921868
Figure 2 |
Foods You Should Not Eat
Foods you should not eat all the time, but are okay to eat sometimes would be chocolate, candy bars, candy, ice cream, and fast food such as french fries, burgers, and deep fried chicken. These foods will make you less strong, and are not healthy to eat at all times! Your favorite animal only eats these foods one time a week seen in Figure 3, if they are going to eat them at all! If you eat a lot of these unhealthy foods, you can become very sick, and start to have problems with your body (5). Although most of the foods are bad, some can be good to eat. Some provide you with the right vitamins to keep you healthy (2).
If you continue to eat healthy foods and only eat unhealthy foods once a week or less, you will be just as strong as your favorite animal! So, before thinking about eating bad foods, think about the elephant, gorilla, or lion, and think if they would eat it!
Figure 3 |
References:
1) Academy of Nutritional and Dietetics. (2014). Surprise! This is Processed Too!. In It’s About Eating Right. Retrieved from http://www.eatright.org/Public/content.aspx?id=6442471055
2) Carocho, M., Barreiro, MF., Morales, P., Ferreira, ICFR. (2014). Adding Molecules to Food, Pros and Cons: A Review on Synthetic and Natural Food Additives. COMPREHENSIVE REVIEWS IN FOOD SCIENCE AND FOOD SAFETY, 13, 377-399.
3)Moubarac, J., Batal, M., Bortoletto Martins, A., Claro, R., Bertazzi Levy, R., Cannon, G., Monterio, C. (2014). Processed and Ultra-processed Food Products: Consumption Trends in Canada from 1983 to 2011. Canadian Journal of Dietetic Practice & Research, 75, 15-21. doi:http://dx.doi.org/10.3148/75.1.2014.15
4)Polopolus, L. (1967). Synthetic, Substitutes, and Food Marketing. Journal of Marketing, 31(4), 12-17.
5)Rezai, G., Kit Teng, P., Mohamed, P., Shamsudin, M. N. (2014). Journal of food marketing. Structural Equation Modeling of Consumer Purchase Intention Toward Synthetic Functioning Foods, 20, 13-34. Doi: 10.1080/10454446.2014.921868
I love the topic of the blog, it is simple enough for younger kids to understand, and you made the important things stand out in a variety of different colored texts which is nice! This sentence I think could maybe be tweaked a little bit: They are foods you should eat everyday, so then you can keep getting stronger seen in Figure 2. It is a good statement, but maybe just put Figure 2 in parenthesis or something, or edit the way you say that at the end of the sentence. Also, if the headings of the three sections were the same size and color, that would add to the aesthetic appeal as well! The title of your blog is listed twice at the top, so maybe if you took away the red colored title, that would help a bit as well? Overall great job!
ReplyDeleteVery colorful! The only color that was kinda hard to see was the bright light blue for "healthy."
ReplyDeleteI would rework these two sentences because it sounds like the person should be able to seen themselves stronger in the first one and like you should be able to see an animal eating ice cream in the second one.
"They are foods you should eat everyday, so then you can keep getting stronger seen in Figure 2"
"Your favorite animal only eats these foods one time a week seen in Figure 3"
*Foods like the ones pictured in Figure 2 are ones you should eat everyday so that you can keep getting stronger" etc.
some of my writing turns gray where it should be black!
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